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    Abyss

    Abyss of sorrow.

    Your presence becomes nevermore;

    Yet remains of warmth.


    Odd place for freestyle haiku and the message, but a friendly reminder to cherish loved ones; give them a hug and enjoy their company, for you never know when it'll end. Yet with absence, there's still a presence.

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    I have to admit I was never one that understood poems, maybe I am too shallow to understand the meanings.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bobrpggamer View Post
    I have to admit I was never one that understood poems, maybe I am too shallow to understand the meanings.
    Eh, I'm a stickler for writing/reading. Granted, that was literally typed on the fly; the meaning may or may not have hit the nail lol.
    A translation: Deep sorrow, for your presence is gone yet the memories of your presence is still warm.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jugginator View Post
    Abyss of sorrow.

    Your presence becomes nevermore;

    Yet remains of warmth.


    Odd place for freestyle haiku and the message, but a friendly reminder to cherish loved ones; give them a hug and enjoy their company, for you never know when it'll end. Yet with absence, there's still a presence.
    Very nice.

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